WALT: Describe a moment in time in detail.
I heard the crowd cheering my name. I ran as fast as i could, I did not stop or they would catch up.
I tried around they were right behind me, I ran as fast as a cheater about to pounce I won Gold.
Yayaya! They cheered my name, I felt proud. I wonder with my Mum and Dad watch me and I also wonder were my friends watching me. by Rhys