Hi Rhys, you have written a great recount of how to make New World little garden. You have used some great nouns to explain how to look after your plant. To be BTB try to use a range of different sentence starters not just 'then'.
Hi Rhys, I like your writing and I like how you used capital letters and full stops. Next time you could put some pictures of your little garden. Thanks Eva:)
Hi Rhys, you have written a great recount of how to make New World little garden. You have used some great nouns to explain how to look after your plant. To be BTB try to use a range of different sentence starters not just 'then'.
ReplyDeleteHi Rhys,I like how you used full stops and capital letters.
ReplyDeleteTo be BTB write little garden instead of 'flower' Also do a capital I
Thanks,Abbie :)
Hi Rhys, I like your writing and I like how you used capital letters and full stops. Next time you could put some pictures of your little garden.
ReplyDeleteThanks Eva:)