Monday 19 September 2016

Room 5 camp


  WALT Explain our camp experiences. it was changing to  get my words right.I enjoyed think about camp when we were writing about it.next time I will write more.
                                                                                                                       



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2 comments:

  1. Archie19 September 2016 at 12:19

    Hi Rhys I like how you explained it well next step could you write what you were talking about when you said at night we were being silly.

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  2. Jemma19 September 2016 at 12:20

    Hi Rhys
    Loved the way u explained the funny part.
    To be BTB u could explain more about the disco.

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